Not Near Zion

We were blind to the writing on the wall,
Some said it was solely about the man,
Not considering what had brought the fall,
Which had started before the man began.

We are in a state of perplexity,
We are walking deeper into the night,
It’s a state of shards and complexity,
They tell us not to lose sight of the light.

Where is the light they say that approaches?
We see the tendrils of gloom trailing us,
The lords of the rings bear feeble branches,
They still want us to come, sit and discuss.

Tell the man to relinquish the power,
The one he holds tightly in that tower.


November 26, 2024.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Emate Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, Beata, for stopping by. I'm honoured.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations. I thoroughly enjoyed your poetic expression of the world today. Yes, they need to discuss. Well written. Blessings of favor. Janis
Emate Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 12:33 AM
Thank you, Janis. I'm honoured.
One Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 6:18 PM
"It's a state of shards and complexity, They tell us not to lose sight of the light." Wonderful poem. Stay strong and keep fighting. The light will come back if we can manage that. Great job.
Emate Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 2:09 AM
Thank you, Some One, for stopping by. I'm deeply honoured.
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