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Not My Decision

Charred
   Charred
   Remains
   URN Confined
   Purposefully stored
   Thrown sometimes in mindful places
   Like parks, lakes and seashores and even green golf courses
   Returning loved ones to rest where they were happiest and most content, forevermore.





Sandra Hudson  1/20/2012
Last line of 21 syllables seems to exceed the allowed space so last word is underneath.

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Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/27/2012 3:13:00 PM Well done Sandra. oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/24/2012 7:25:00 AM Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Sandra. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 1/21/2012 6:51:00 PM It still looks like a fibonacci, and a good one as well. The width of this page is too narrow to accomodate any line with twenty-one syllables or more. The last line is one continuous line without interruption. Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 1/21/2012 12:41:00 PM I think very fondly of this piece. Login to Reply Date: 1/21/2012 12:42:00 PM Couldn't get the title.

John Rhinem Date: 1/21/2012 10:25:00 AM Smile ˜ Hahahaha, I Was Just Thinking, That If I Myself Could Then I Would Become The Seaoning For A Bowl Of Soup ˜ Hey Why Not I Mean, I'll Be In Heaven Anyway * Forevermore ˜ Thank You For Passing By My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Sandra ˜ Love Always, John!:) * Login to Reply Date: 1/21/2012 10:31:00 AM Smile ˜ Or Maybe, I Could Be The Meatballs In Someones Plate Of Spaghetti??? :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/20/2012 8:30:00 PM Sandra,I love this thought. I think it is much better to return ashes to the earth this way. My mom finds it appalling, so I might have to make a will to have it done to myself. I think it's against my church's teachings, but I think it is just better for the earth that way! Login to Reply

Jason Lewis Date: 1/20/2012 5:38:00 PM interesting Login to Reply