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Charred Charred Remains URN Confined Purposefully stored Thrown sometimes in mindful places Like parks, lakes and seashores and even green golf courses Returning loved ones to rest where they were happiest and most content, forevermore. Sandra Hudson 1/20/2012 Last line of 21 syllables seems to exceed the allowed space so last word is underneath.

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Date: 1/27/2012 3:13:00 PM
Well done Sandra. oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/24/2012 7:25:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Sandra. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2012 6:51:00 PM
It still looks like a fibonacci, and a good one as well. The width of this page is too narrow to accomodate any line with twenty-one syllables or more. The last line is one continuous line without interruption.
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Date: 1/21/2012 12:41:00 PM
I think very fondly of this piece.
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Date: 1/21/2012 12:42:00 PM
Couldn't get the title.
Date: 1/21/2012 10:25:00 AM
Smile ˜ Hahahaha, I Was Just Thinking, That If I Myself Could Then I Would Become The Seaoning For A Bowl Of Soup ˜ Hey Why Not I Mean, I'll Be In Heaven Anyway * Forevermore ˜ Thank You For Passing By My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Sandra ˜ Love Always, John!:) *
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Date: 1/21/2012 10:31:00 AM
Smile ˜ Or Maybe, I Could Be The Meatballs In Someones Plate Of Spaghetti??? :)
Date: 1/20/2012 8:30:00 PM
Sandra,I love this thought. I think it is much better to return ashes to the earth this way. My mom finds it appalling, so I might have to make a will to have it done to myself. I think it's against my church's teachings, but I think it is just better for the earth that way!
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Date: 1/20/2012 5:38:00 PM
interesting
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