Sandra Hudson Poet Fibonacci

Not My Decision

Charred
   Charred
   Remains
   URN Confined
   Purposefully stored
   Thrown sometimes in mindful places
   Like parks, lakes and seashores and even green golf courses
   Returning loved ones to rest where they were happiest and most content, forevermore.





Sandra Hudson  1/20/2012
Last line of 21 syllables seems to exceed the allowed space so last word is underneath.

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2012 at 3:13 PM Well done Sandra. oxox love Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown January 24, 2012 at 7:25 AM Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Sandra. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit January 21, 2012 at 6:51 PM It still looks like a fibonacci, and a good one as well. The width of this page is too narrow to accomodate any line with twenty-one syllables or more. The last line is one continuous line without interruption.

John Loving Iii January 21, 2012 at 12:41 PM I think very fondly of this piece. January 21, 2012 at 12:42 PM Couldn't get the title.

John Rhinem January 21, 2012 at 10:25 AM Smile ˜ Hahahaha, I Was Just Thinking, That If I Myself Could Then I Would Become The Seaoning For A Bowl Of Soup ˜ Hey Why Not I Mean, I'll Be In Heaven Anyway * Forevermore ˜ Thank You For Passing By My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Sandra ˜ Love Always, John!:) * January 21, 2012 at 10:31 AM Smile ˜ Or Maybe, I Could Be The Meatballs In Someones Plate Of Spaghetti??? :)

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2012 at 8:30 PM Sandra,I love this thought. I think it is much better to return ashes to the earth this way. My mom finds it appalling, so I might have to make a will to have it done to myself. I think it's against my church's teachings, but I think it is just better for the earth that way!

Jason Lewis January 20, 2012 at 5:38 PM interesting