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Choral gladioli  in formal circles,
Standing awkward beneath the pines’
Shade  -  their  pinks and purples
Gasping in the gloom for sunshine.

Immersed in a happy crowd mustered
Around them  - dandelions in masses
Like children in unruly jostling clusters,
A natural  attraction - yellow dresses

Dancing  to the music  of the breeze,    
Laughing  and touching heads, 
Fast growing, well  rooted -  at ease:
They want to be here, they‘re glad.

Gladioli  are ordered  there in rings
Dutifully participatory,
Rendering songs an outsider sings
In unheeding dandelion  territory.

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Written   27  July 2014 
(I wrote this when watching the formal beds of flowers
 in a somewhat overgrown garden in the city.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/6/2014 10:29:00 PM
SIDNEY,, Congrats, on your win.... LINDA
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Date: 8/4/2014 3:01:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive, well done :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:03:00 AM
Congrats...Sara
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:56:00 AM
I REALLY love this one. So colorful too. Congrats to you.
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:20:00 AM
Congrats on this beautiful winning write Sidney !
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:20:00 PM
Strikingly descriptive Sidney. Quite the gem...congrats Tim
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:53:00 PM
This is so delightful. What a picture you drew of the arrogant little dandelions, dancing befoe the cowed gladioli. Loved it. Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:49:00 PM
Sidney, I am going to enjoy getting to know your poetry better. I am relatively new. This is a stunning piece of verse; drew me right into the crowd of happy dandelions. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:14:00 PM
Stunning in every description! I can see it all, in glorious colors......... I'm so happy you are back, Sydney......this is a supreme example of why we have missed your poetry ! :)
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:00:00 PM
I'm sure I've told you before how much I like your poems, and I certainly like this one! it's a very polished piece, with some lovely colourful imagery - "...pinks and purples/gasping in the gloom for sunshine" is particularly striking, and I like the dandelions in their 'yellow dresses' - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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