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Not Just Yet

I had a long day and I carried the world upon my shoulder, The journey was long lonely and arduous, I want to lie down and close my eyes... But not yet! The sun is setting gently, As a bitter wind sighs through the evening haze I find frost in my most fervent fire, I want to lay my burden down and quietly sneak away from the din of the day... But not yet! I had my days in the sun I frolicked and I had fun, It’s time to retreat to my safe haven and reminisce about those willful days, I am ready to confess and mend my ways... But not just yet! ~The Fire Inside contest by J L Rodeheaver

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Date: 11/14/2017 4:58:00 AM
Beautiful write, Abdul, congrats on your well-earned win, friend. Blessings! :-)
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Abdul.
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Date: 11/10/2017 6:58:00 PM
I enjoyed this very much! It's that human condition!
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