Not Just People

It's just not the same
darkness swirls
but there's no light
no will left to fight

I miss you
and your semblance of right

So, I send my love out in the breeze
take it, take me, if you please
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 6:41 PM
Hello TS Poetry, I like the way you send te love into the air. Have a nice evening my friend,
Aristy Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 6:15 AM
"Love is in the air" , it is as you well expresses it : "So, I send my love out in the breeze take it, take me, if you please" " Congratulations, TS!
Manassian Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 11:01 PM
How romantic and sweet, Tim. Lovely read.
Horne Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 5:32 AM
just beautiful
Mcintosh Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:48 AM
Lovely... many blessings Gina
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 1:07 AM
love the sentiment, a poem of hope TS:-) hugs Jan xx
There Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:28 PM
Lovely piece of verse, TS. May love find its way back swiftly and with conviction ~
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