Not Here

I look at your bed, made nice and neat.
Blankets and pillows cleaned, yet their empty. Nothing in it, no arms, no feet.

Your clothes all folded, no dirty ones to be washed,
No clean ones to be worn, for you
Not here with me.

Your toys and books all put away!
Your just not here to play
Today.

Your empty plates sit at the table,
I can’t eat without you, I’m
Just not able.

No kids here tonight to tuck into bed. No
Goodnight kiss to give on your
Head.

I hope my loves are tucked all nice and tight
And think of mommy threw out the
Night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Frampton Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 8:46 AM
aww, that is such a sweet poem :)
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Linn. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Linn, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Linn. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 6:12 PM
a bit sad as we all are to let go....welcome to the soup!
Spence Sr Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 8:36 AM
This is so wonderful. It reminds me of my children. They are all grown and are off into the world. Now I can get out of my bed without making it. Great job, Blessings!
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 6:19 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Linn. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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