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Not Even and Answer

Not even an answer Not even an Answer, Just one single hard lesson. One that must have been watching me all day long. Waiting, there in the shadows While I picked up rocks in the corrals, or maybe when I was clearing the sinuses of troughs, with compressed air and trowel Not even an answer Just a cold silence, as the lesson slowly crawled up my leg biting me with needle tipped feet Getting under my skin Running down my spine. Eyeballing the hairs on the back of my neck with hungry eyes while they stand up, huddled like sheep in the night. Not even an Answer There were nine saddles in the barn All generations old. Along with a bit with the letters U.S. Cavalry on the side 1865 I'm told. Found on the ground amongst the fallen horse's bones. The arrow tip, long returned to the earth after piercing his heart. The desert shadows rising and falling with the days and years. Until it was stumbled upon and brought to hang in the barn. Not even an Answer When the barn fell and the flames died and all that remained were fumes of home and history The boss asked “What happened?” But as the wind continued. I couldn't speak.

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Date: 10/18/2016 10:45:00 PM
TREY P, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2016 8:06:00 PM
The ending says it all. 101.... ;) wow, impressive, Trey, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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