Not Brothers

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JS Lambert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Maybe you CAN find a way to mend this relationship. Hope you'll give it a try, Joseph. My sister and I disagree on many things, but she's my sister and I'll always love her. This rhyme could easily be adapted to a sonnet. Per your question, I have no set style, but I enjoy writing humor most of all. Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 6:50 PM
A touching piece..are you sure it cant be fixed? There is a certain bond though, that cant be broken. Very nice write. BG
Lambert Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Interesting
Reading this saddens me....my brother and I used to be really close...actually I hadn't known anyone else that was as close to a sibling as my brother and I were....but now we are not...I still hurt every day over this...not sure if it'd been better to have never been close so that I don't know what I'm missing...or to have been close and yearn for it again like I do now....I really the way you have conveyed this...well done!
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