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O~ what dread My muse in bed Dear me~ that's ink she's bled Tried sopping it with bread Her boots been filled with lead I think she's good as dead O~ good grief she said Shaking her head You've been misled You plain misread She left her body there and fled AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Submitted on August 4, 2020 for contest FAVOURITE POEM IN RHYME FROM JULY 2019 sponsored by JULIA WARD Originally posted on July 29, 2019

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Date: 3/15/2020 12:21:00 AM
Those darned muses and their capricious ways... fun write, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2020 9:33:00 AM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/30/2019 9:28:00 PM
Love this poem and it style I might try it someday. Great one!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/31/2019 3:40:00 AM
I'll be looking forward to reading what you come up with.
Date: 7/30/2019 2:15:00 PM
Come back! Come back! ---Oh! You mean it's you who fled?! LOL. Interesting poem, Line. :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/30/2019 2:35:00 PM
O~ my muse fled.... again.
Date: 7/30/2019 5:39:00 AM
I love the last line, of course, being a big believer of being able to leave your body wherever you want!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/30/2019 8:47:00 AM
LOL as long as you don't litter of course.
Date: 7/30/2019 12:08:00 AM
Line, I like this monorhyme. Time to wake, sleepy-head. -Richard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/30/2019 8:48:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard.
Date: 7/29/2019 3:57:00 PM
I really liked this one Line, such good lines with nice rhyme too!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2019 5:28:00 PM
Thanks, Gordon. Most appreciated.

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