Not Alone

Simple tears throughout the years 
seem like a sprinkle of rain... 
Once you suffer a loss and pay the ultimate cost,
 the sprinkle becomes a downpour of pain.
 The water falls as you recall 
every memory ever had from within... 
Painstakingly loud, you scream at the clouds, "Please stop!" 
For the pain burns your skin. 
Suddenly alone, fearing the unknown, 
a life being sung a cappella...
 Inside your head, the voice of the dead... 
"Remember you have your umbrella."
 Listen to that voice and turn down the other noise 
for the truth is not everything is seeing.
 Take a deep breathe, there is no such thing as death... 
There is only a mere change of being.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/20/2013 8:25:00 AM
congratulations Crystal,, enjoyed your winning poem. Hugs*SKAT
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Date: 9/17/2013 2:23:00 PM
Great creative winning work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/17/2013 2:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Date: 9/15/2013 7:51:00 PM
Congrats - Nice going. Ralph
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Crystal Tichenor
Date: 9/16/2013 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Ralph! :)
Date: 9/15/2013 4:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Crystal Tichenor
Date: 9/16/2013 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so much! And cool, my last name used to be Morgan, before that marriage stuff changed things lol :)
Date: 9/15/2013 4:06:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest,Crystal
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Crystal Tichenor
Date: 9/16/2013 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 9/14/2013 6:13:00 PM
Hi Crystal, Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
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Crystal Tichenor
Date: 9/16/2013 7:19:00 AM
Wow, thank you so much! I am so happy and honored! Yay!!!!!! :D Thank you again! And I will definitely be checking out your poems! :)
Date: 9/7/2013 8:16:00 PM
Crystal, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *...
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Crystal Tichenor
Date: 9/16/2013 7:17:00 AM
Thank you so much! And so happy to have made a new friend! :) I'll be dropping by shortly with that hello ;-)
Date: 9/6/2013 2:01:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Crystal ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Crystal Tichenor
Date: 9/6/2013 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for the welcome! I hope to sit down and start reading other poetry tonight! I'm so excited to be a part of the community, to have a place to share my experiences and poetry, and to be let in to the lives of others through their experiences and poetry as well. :) Much love to you! :) *Crystal*
Date: 9/5/2013 5:25:00 PM
Hi Crystal, a deep first poem, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Crystal Tichenor
Date: 9/6/2013 8:03:00 AM
Thank you! And thank you so much for having me! I've been looking for somewhere to share my poetry for awhile now and happened across this site. I'm so glad to be a part of it. Thanks again for welcoming me to the community! I do believe I entered your contest. :) Drama & love to you too ;-) *Crystal*
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