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Not all is lost

Colored leaves shimmered in the rain The beauty could not be washed away Reflecting in calm dark waters, a mirror of peace shined through anyway The fog in silence, drifted around hardened rocks As if hearts waited to be warmed and minds unblocked Visual contrast came along with a blending, as if a divide had now been crossed Able to see each other's side with understanding Light is found in darkness, not all is lost Heidi Sands 10/14/24 (C)opyright

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Date: 1/5/2025 8:29:00 AM
Hello Heidi.' Good words and a great message.' From you here.' Much could be achived if only We really tried.? To take Loves providence deep Inside.'
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2025 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Joe. I appreciate your feedback. Happy New Year :)
Date: 12/3/2024 12:31:00 AM
Light is always found in darkness dear friend, i firmly believe this and as you so eloquently write about in this awesome poem. Such a sincere write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Congratulations my friend on your inclusion in the latest Anthology.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2024 12:42:00 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer. I appreciate your support. It means a lot to me . I hope you are well :)
Date: 12/2/2024 8:14:00 AM
I like the imagery and sense of hope portrayed by this poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2024 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Mike :)
Date: 11/19/2024 8:28:00 PM
'Light in darkness' -- bring it on, Heidi. More and more!! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 11/20/2024 5:42:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. Definetly need more light. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 11/19/2024 4:26:00 AM
In these times especially Heidi, your beautiful message of peace and understanding, is most needed! A wonderful poem indeed!!! Happy Tuesday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/19/2024 4:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike. I hope all is well. Happy Tuesday :) xxoo
Date: 11/16/2024 3:40:00 PM
You got it across here Heidi.. Yes all is not lost.'
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2024 5:04:00 AM
Thank you very much Joe :)
Date: 11/8/2024 11:33:00 PM
Melancholy feelings in this one Heidi, a sense of hope is there. hope you are well and are in a safer enviorement. You haven't posted in a while. Hope to see you back soon...
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Date: 11/10/2024 4:52:00 AM
Hi. Michael. Thank you. For now, in a place for at least the winter. I miss my home. I will write when I can. My muse has not been around with adjusting. I hope you are well. I appreciate your kind comments :)
Date: 11/1/2024 3:22:00 PM
Dear Heidi, i agree and such wise words really, i love especially the last line “ Light is found in darkness, not all is lost” not all is lost yes and in darkness we find always light, i love the imagery and flow of your words in this. Pleasure reading you always~ sending you light
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/1/2024 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to leave this kind feedback. I appreciate it very much. :)
Date: 10/28/2024 7:13:00 AM
Beautiful imagery.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2024 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Mike :)
Date: 10/27/2024 9:14:00 AM
I agree with you, when one thinks all is lost, 'Light is found in darkness'. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2024 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. It is nice to see your kind comments today. I appreciate it. Hugs :)
Date: 10/24/2024 7:43:00 AM
Another beautifully expressed inspiration. Glad to see you more often! :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2024 12:05:00 PM
Very nice to see your kind comments. I appreciate your support. Have a nice day Linda. Thank you :)
Date: 10/23/2024 7:13:00 AM
Dear Heidi, How did I miss this gem!! I just adored your message of hope and resilience in adversity. You made great use of imagery of nature—colored leaves, calm waters, and fog—to illustrate the beauty and peace that can emerge even in difficult circumstances. Lovely!! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2024 7:24:00 AM
Thank you very much Daniel. Autumn Blessings :)
Date: 10/23/2024 4:22:00 AM
Beautifully penned Heidi. All the best...Hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2024 5:16:00 AM
Thank you Maria :)
Date: 10/19/2024 8:39:00 PM
Heidi, what wonderful depth of emotion and consolation "mirrored" in your exquisite lines. Thank you sharing this beautiful gem. Blessings!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/20/2024 4:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Sam. I appreciate your kind comment . Blessings :)
Date: 10/19/2024 7:58:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/19/2024 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I hope all is well :)
Date: 10/19/2024 3:13:00 AM
YOUR VISUAL CONTRAST IS BREATHTAKING AND BEAUTIFUL TO READ. LIGHT IS ALWAYS FOUND IN DARKNESS MY FRIEND, I TOTALLY AGREE. SORRY ABOUT CAPS. MY COMPUTER HAS A MIND OF ITS OWN. LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/19/2024 5:17:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. I hope all is well :)
Date: 10/18/2024 8:10:00 AM
Very nicely penned Heidi, hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/18/2024 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. Hugs :)
Date: 10/16/2024 7:07:00 AM
As a metaphor, such beauty and hope your words inspire for humanity ! Heidi, this is such a lovely write. Happy Wednesday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/16/2024 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Mike. Happy Wednesday :)
Date: 10/16/2024 1:41:00 AM
There is beauty in seeing shimmering leaves flowing in a small river. Great imagery.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/16/2024 4:27:00 AM
Thank you Victor :)
Date: 10/15/2024 3:40:00 PM
Hello Heidi, love this poem. yes light is found in the darkness. There is beauty in nature. right now in this autumn season. Now that the leaves are changing color. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2024 10:09:00 AM
Hello Heidi, yes i enjoyed this poem. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2024 4:13:00 PM
Hi Darlene. I am happy you loved this so much beauty in nature , yes! Have a nice evening . Hugs :)
Date: 10/15/2024 1:51:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write. Great ending. Yes, light is found in darkness. Hugs...  Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away.................
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2024 2:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula. I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope you are having a nice Autumn day too. Hugs :)
Date: 10/14/2024 6:53:00 PM
Very pithy read!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2024 4:14:00 AM
Thank you Abdullah :)
Date: 10/14/2024 3:19:00 PM
Your poetry blooms of hope and trust, and I really liked it Heidi, hope your well, thinking of you :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2024 3:28:00 PM
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well :)

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