Not Afraid

“Summer broke and drained. Now we are safe.
The days lose confidence, and can be faced
Indoors.”
             (Philip Larkin)


She watches how a single shard of light
passes through the gap between
her grandmother’s old curtains,
touching all it passes, till it finds
the mantelpiece and the hairline cracks
in the Chinese vase she broke,

when she was five years’ old
and not afraid of movement,
not afraid of touching colours,
dancing like the dust – delighted to be
caught by any searching tendril
of the sun’s bright web.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 7, 2016 at 8:52 AM
awesome write
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September 30, 2009 at 4:18 PM
What an interesting view. Good use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Jan. Love, Carol
Pate Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 6:11 PM
Congratulations. Beautiful poem. Nice imagery and playful.
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August 8, 2009 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations on being featured. Great writing. Sara
Caliri Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 1:15 PM
Very well-written. I love any detail imgery of the intangibles, especially light...
Adeite Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 8:35 AM
This is a wonderful write, a well deserved feature of this week. This piece is awesome and you such a creative poet too. Keep writing. Adeleke
Jordan Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 7:54 PM
Jan this poem is outstanding and certainly deserves to be featured - congratulations - God Bless, MJ
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
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August 3, 2009 at 11:56 AM
Nice, Congrats on the feature......:JP]
Christian Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 9:21 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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August 3, 2009 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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