Not a Snow Day

I
can see
the soft clouds
go drifting by
outside my window.
It’s a stay at home day,
not doing a damn thing day,
I’m calling it a no go day.
I don’t know when I last felt this way.
Wait a minute it was just yesterday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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February 24, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Lovely etheree, nice selection of words to aid the imagery..
Brotherton Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 5:33 PM
I appreciate the comment, Silent One. Have a glorious weekend, my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 2:00 AM
Sometimes we just need such a day to switch off and relax, there's always tommorow to do those jobs you were planning to do. Tom
Brotherton Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 5:32 PM
I guess that is the true meaning of retirement. Put off until tomorrow what you don't feel like doing today.
Greenhough Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 10:08 PM
A good poem. Keep up the good work.
Brotherton Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Hilda. Have a wonderful weekend.
Baker Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 9:53 PM
I like the mood you're in today, my friend. It's a very Jerry afternoon. Cheers! Bill
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February 24, 2024 at 5:30 PM
Just a s well make it a three day weekend. Although, every week is a seven day weekend now.
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