Not a Phrase Uttered

The rippled lake ebbs strangely silent 
while memories cling  to me---
there's not a tinge of you here anymore
and my fiery pulse  now withers:

I roam upon the  dunes of time
as  current’s surge echoes like waves' blare,
your indifferent glance marks 
a broken oath without even one phrase told...

How I feel heart's nudge
this mindful  certainty allowing me
to grasp the quicksand of  truth--

You are not coming back, ever,
that from instinct's light, I finally concede
when quelled language 
numb as a crest unobtrusively waning
-----------------means a goodbye not uttered.




For Richard Lamoureux 's Contest
Honourable Mentions Worth Mentioning
Re-posted  01/05/2019
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This is perhaps one of my poems which touched
me dearly when I wrote it. I felt the anguish 
of not being able to speak what the heart needed
to express by using metaphors and symbolism.
With sincerity, I did not expect to get an HM. Thank you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Tenderly expressed Nette. So lovely! Congratulations on your third placement! : ) xxoo
Wolf Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Also, with sincerity, it's hard to understand how this heartstring-stirring poesy got a mere "HM" the first time. Congrats, nette, on moving up to Trophy Status with this one. Best wishes, gw
Carmack Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 11:15 AM
I wish I had more time to host contests. Glad to have found you on this winner's list. As usual, love your poem. Congrats and hugs to you Nette.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:23 AM
A deserving winner. Hugs Rick.
Sergi Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 5:56 PM
A very sad and prophetic poem, net. I loved it BUONA FORTUNA!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 1:29 AM
Time can steal those precious moments and then it is too late. A real beauty Nette. Congratulations on your deserving win. I don't know how Line judged this contest there were so many outstanding entries. They would've left me in a quandary. xxoo
Lindley Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 2:46 PM
You my dear friend do beauty, depth and message so wondrously well in this superbly crafted piece! It is surely a gleaming diamond mounted in massive gold crown!! A fav,, such massive talent exhibited..
Cunningham Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 6:06 AM
The worst is when you're left hanging. Well written nette. Tom
Parker Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 6:07 PM
the atmosphere of a singular thought of loss in reflection...nicely done...good luck
Leffanta Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 5:22 PM
I hope they impeach Trump because he will never fall for the quicksand of truth! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
Hinshaw Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Perfect entry for the contest, nette. I predict this insightful verse to be at the top of the winner's list. Thanks for your welcome comment re Chief Randy Moose. A belated happy Easter since I think it is already Monday where you live! Bob
Pandit Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Unsaid words..lack of closure..Best wishes, Nette.
May Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 2:01 PM
Great write Nette...Best wishes in the Contest...
Andresen Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 1:33 PM
- Like drowning in the naked truth, Nette - A great touching writing :) - Luck in the contest - Easter hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Beautiful expression, Nette! I guess it takes a gift of discernment to know what should be uttered or unuttered.
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