Nostalgic Gum

gum
chewing
makes breath fresh
ready for kiss
Clove
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gorelick Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:10 AM
Smack! Good one..creative thought..BG
Ball Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 10:04 PM
good but expand the chewing and he saliva more and of course tell the story of gum , but anyway your the writer and I liked it. Robert A. Ball
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