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Nostalgia

Nostalgia drives me to my ancestral home Where the mockingbirds do freely roam The scent of Frangipani infuses the air No pollution you can find there At twilight vermillion rays make the pellucid river so Along the banks luscious fruit laden trees are bent low kids make ripples in river with their stone dropping Some animals in the menagerie are seen hopping They make noises as if wanting release I totally unwind here, my tensions temporarily cease.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/17/2018 10:45:00 PM
Great job arrange the 10 words, congratulations on your win, Bawa. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:28:00 AM
Bawa, you have described a lovely safe haven where, if only for a moment, all worries and fears can be set aside, lovely.
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:15:00 PM
Nostalgia beautifully expressed with wonderful imagery Bawa. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your lovely poem. ~Susan
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:28:00 PM
Congrats, Bawa, on your fine win.
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 1/12/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you !
Date: 1/11/2018 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations Bawa :)
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 1/12/2018 7:54:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/11/2018 4:45:00 PM
Hi Bawa, You used the given words to express" nostalgia " well :-) Alexis
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Date: 1/11/2018 2:54:00 PM
Great use of the ten words Bawa... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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