Nosferatu's Heir

Dying light in West
     Sunset of revelation
          Leather wings transmute
Shameful legacy refused
     Better hungry than blood drunk

5/25/16
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Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 6:14 PM
ooh, that last line is AWESOME!!
Quigley Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Thank you!
Vaso Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Great Tanka, poem and photos go well together!
Quigley Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Thanks, Arthur!
Smith Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:50 PM
I like it Tom...the pictures are pretty creepy...lol
Quigley Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Thanks, Tim! The eyes on that second one--the original movie Nosferatu--are as freaky as any modern makeup, IMO!
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