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Nose Pierce

cartiledge and flesh,
blood and sweat.
tears flowing, nose stinging.
the press of a piercing gun,
the antisecptic.
all of this a nightmare just to fill ones desires.
To pierce thy nose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Just correct two misspelled words here: In your first line, "cartiledge" is "cartilage". In the fifth line, "antisecptic" is "antiseptic". Everything else looks fine. This rather short essay delivers decent descriptiveness.
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 3:12 PM
Sounds like a terrible ordeal. Very descriptive. Sara
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