Get Your Premium Membership

Nose Pierce

cartiledge and flesh, blood and sweat. tears flowing, nose stinging. the press of a piercing gun, the antisecptic. all of this a nightmare just to fill ones desires. To pierce thy nose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/17/2011 4:21:00 PM
Just correct two misspelled words here: In your first line, "cartiledge" is "cartilage". In the fifth line, "antisecptic" is "antiseptic". Everything else looks fine. This rather short essay delivers decent descriptiveness.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2009 3:12:00 PM
Sounds like a terrible ordeal. Very descriptive. Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things