Northern Lights - Trochee

Night emotes in sun whipped sheets,
            weaved from rainbow thread.
           Blueish greens that shyly wink,  
                  blushing pink to red.

                       -09 Apr 2015-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations on your win for this lovely poem, David. What a beautiful picture you painted! Sandra
A  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 9:55 PM
David, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT
Gorelick Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Lovely, enjoyed and congrats .BG
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Lovely and colourful imagery, David! Deservedly on the winners' list. Congratulations! // paul
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 6:40 AM
Dropping back with my congrats David:-) Hugs Jan xx
Carmack Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 3:00 AM
Another beautiful entry, congrats David.
A  Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 12:42 AM
David:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 12:41 AM
This is a gorgeous poem, David and could easily have been my number one choice. What lovely imagery. Congrats in my contest.
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 2:10 AM
David this is divine - amazing imagery I hope Andrea loves it as much as I do - a 7 from me! Hugs Jan xx:-)
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