Northern Lights

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God mixing colours ~above us the sky flashes~ a masterpiece made unbelievable what mother nature painted for us to enjoy northern lights beauty ~up there where we all look at~ our unknown sweet home

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Karen Croft

Date: 11/18/2023 1:15:00 AM

So beautiful!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/18/2023 1:29:00 AM

Thank you so much for passing by and your comment.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/16/2023 1:34:00 AM

Brilliant poem. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/16/2023 1:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor. Have a great dayxxx

Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/15/2023 8:16:00 PM

Beautifully written Maria; and I love the way the poem swirls on the page as if Northern Lights. Thanks

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/16/2023 12:26:00 AM

Good morning Jeff. Thank you very much for reading and leaving your nice comment. Blessings!

Bill Baker

Date: 11/15/2023 6:23:00 PM

The Northern Lights are a pleasure to observe, Maria. We get them here in Texas, too. I like the way you made a string of Haikus. Your imagery was eloquent, my friend. Bill

Bill Baker
Date: 11/16/2023 9:08:00 PM

They appear in the mountains near a town named Marfa almost every year. It's a big deal if you happen to be there when they appear. I haven't heard of them appearing any place else in Texas. Have a great day! Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/16/2023 12:30:00 AM

Hello Bill. It's strange you can see the Northern Lights in Texas, as you are in the very South of the country. Anyway, that's nice. Here we can't see them, but it must be beautiful. Thank you Bill for your comment. Have a nice day!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/15/2023 3:57:00 PM

I found your poem enchanting, Maria. You've captured the Northern Lights beautifully and the image was outstanding. The ending was perfect. 'up there...our unknown sweet home." Well done...have a blessed evening, talent poetess! hugs from Texas, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/15/2023 4:05:00 PM

My hugs from Spain my beloved friend. Thank you for your lovely comments all the time. Take care my friendxxx