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Northern Lights


                 God mixing colours
    ~above us the sky flashes~
  a masterpiece made

     unbelievable
          what mother nature painted
                        for us to enjoy

                        northern lights beauty
     ~up there where we all look at~
our unknown sweet home
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Croft Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 1:15 AM
So beautiful!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 1:29 AM
Thank you so much for passing by and your comment.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 1:34 AM
Brilliant poem. Blessings.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 1:42 AM
Thank you so much Victor. Have a great dayxxx
Connelly Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Beautifully written Maria; and I love the way the poem swirls on the page as if Northern Lights. Thanks
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 12:26 AM
Good morning Jeff. Thank you very much for reading and leaving your nice comment. Blessings!
Baker Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 6:23 PM
The Northern Lights are a pleasure to observe, Maria. We get them here in Texas, too. I like the way you made a string of Haikus. Your imagery was eloquent, my friend. Bill
Baker Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 9:08 PM
They appear in the mountains near a town named Marfa almost every year. It's a big deal if you happen to be there when they appear. I haven't heard of them appearing any place else in Texas. Have a great day! Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 12:30 AM
Hello Bill. It's strange you can see the Northern Lights in Texas, as you are in the very South of the country. Anyway, that's nice. Here we can't see them, but it must be beautiful. Thank you Bill for your comment. Have a nice day!
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