Phyllis Babcock Poet Personification

Northern Light Angel

In twilight beneath the tapestries of stars
She silently pulled  on her slippers
To dance upon the earth's orb
Twinkling star dust with each step
She whirled around the heavens
Light followed in her foot steps
Each step illuminated the sky
The angel  created a  magical glow
The sky became vibrant shades
as she danced across the sky
Her unsurpassed beauty and inner glow
humbled my senses as she flowed
She left quickly and left me longing for more.

2/10/13

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Betty Bolden February 22, 2013 at 3:37 AM Wonderful just so nice.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 19, 2013 at 10:20 AM Dear Phyllis,Hope this finds You and Yours Healthy and High in the Spirit. The imagery is so clear, I can see the Angel dancing across the evening sky "She left quickly and left me longing for more" also. When I was young my grandpa took me to Canada to watch the "Northern Light Angel" dancing thru the night skys. Great Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

John Loving Iii February 19, 2013 at 9:30 AM Ease up with the cold weather.

Frederick Mungo February 19, 2013 at 8:35 AM I THINK THIS IS PURE CREATIVITY GOOD WORK MAM.

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2013 at 10:27 PM and I am seeing this one again. Write MORE, Phyllis. I know you can get so inspired by your beautiful landscape you tell us of in your poetry.

Debbie Duncan February 11, 2013 at 6:58 PM Oh, I love this Phyllis ;} I wrote something like this, called night skies 1999,,, it's not posted, though . I really love your ;} thank you for reading Missing pieces ;} xx

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2013 at 11:36 PM oh, my , one of your sweetest poems yet, Phyllis. I love how you put an angel in the sky with those lights. showing such imagination. Luv,Andrea

Connie Gildersleeve February 10, 2013 at 1:56 PM Phyllis your poem evokes whimsy and magical visions of surrealism. It challenges my imagination to believe. Warm Smiles Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen February 10, 2013 at 12:56 PM A lovely view and lovely poem Phyllis. - Have you seen the Northern Lights? - North in Norway is much northern light, but it's far from where I live, I've never seen it in real life. -Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)