North Winds

howling northern winds

break bare tree limbs and branches

leaving open wounds


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Written 1-26-2016

hurtpaintreeweatherwindhaiku

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 2/11/2016 9:00:00 AM

That's super cold, but yr sharing is warm.

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/13/2016 5:16:00 PM

Ahhh that is so sweet! Thank you.

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2016 12:21:00 PM

Susan, love the deep imagery, Nice haiku. thanks for sharing. ** SKAT **

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 10:11:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting! Very nice.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/30/2016 5:27:00 PM

Hi Susa, I love the awesome imagery of this wintery Haiku! The personification of the trees makes me feel their pain! Best regards. Pandita

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/31/2016 6:42:00 PM

Why thank you Pandita! What a wonderful comment. Take care.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/30/2016 2:24:00 PM

You paint a chilly and 'sore' picture, Susan, which means that you capably managed to transmit what you had in mind:) ~ well done! ~ Regards // paul

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/31/2016 6:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul! Appreciate it.