Normal Days

For a normal day I long for one in my life One without struggle.

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Weeping Willow

Date: 5/4/2016 8:49:00 AM

Indeed I do. If not more. Or starting with one.

Sue Mason

Date: 1/12/2010 11:27:00 AM

..... whatever "normal" is ... LOL ... wonderful write, Abe!!

Milton Toran

Date: 1/12/2010 6:20:00 AM

Nice senryu. Not only accurate, but also perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Congratulations on your featured write! Milt

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/12/2010 4:52:00 AM

Me Too!!! Congrats on the feature. Vince

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2010 1:45:00 PM

Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Abe >> James

Elaine George

Date: 1/11/2010 8:15:00 AM

Me too!!!! Terrific senryu, Abe. Love, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2010 4:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 1/10/2010 11:58:00 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Abe.Rgds Brian

John Freeman

Date: 1/10/2010 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations Abe, on your well deserved feature. Sincerely, Moses

Date: 1/10/2010 1:30:00 PM

So much said in just three lines. I can really relate to this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! I wish you ongoing success. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/10/2010 1:14:00 PM

I fear a day without struggle may not be possible on this troubled earth....but it doesn't hurt to hope! Speaking of hope...I do hope you and your family had a wonderful holiday dear Abe, and all is well? Congratulations on this thoughtful, and insightful poem on the featured page! Hugs...Carrie

Janette Fisher

Date: 1/10/2010 11:56:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/19/2009 5:31:00 AM

B. C. a period set ensconced with out rampant strife days near death end life.......... Be careful what you wish for....Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 9/11/2009 8:57:00 AM

Decent people should never be allowed to struggle, yet drug lords rich it up, super Senyru Abe>>James

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/7/2009 8:28:00 AM

Good luck with that one Abe. Wishing for you and me both. Sent you soup mail the other day, just checking you received. Hope your wife is feeling well. Hugs, Shar xoxo

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/21/2008 6:10:00 PM

I long for a normal day too, I have so many days repeating themselves filled with turmoil and repitition. Lovely write...Raul

Anna Kittrell

Date: 12/17/2008 10:37:00 AM

Great.