Normal Days

For a normal day
I long for one in my life
One without struggle.

lifesenryu

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Weeping Willow

May 4, 2016 at 8:49 AM

Indeed I do. If not more. Or starting with one.

Sue Mason

January 12, 2010 at 11:27 AM

..... whatever "normal" is ... LOL ... wonderful write, Abe!!

Milton Toran

January 12, 2010 at 6:20 AM

Nice senryu. Not only accurate, but also perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Congratulations on your featured write! Milt

Vince Suzadail Jr.

January 12, 2010 at 4:52 AM

Me Too!!! Congrats on the feature. Vince

James Fraser

January 11, 2010 at 1:45 PM

Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Abe >> James

Elaine George

January 11, 2010 at 8:15 AM

Me too!!!! Terrific senryu, Abe. Love, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 11, 2010 at 4:45 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

January 10, 2010 at 11:58 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Abe.Rgds Brian

John Freeman

January 10, 2010 at 7:27 PM

Congratulations Abe, on your well deserved feature. Sincerely, Moses

January 10, 2010 at 1:30 PM

So much said in just three lines. I can really relate to this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! I wish you ongoing success. Karen

Carrie Richards

January 10, 2010 at 1:14 PM

I fear a day without struggle may not be possible on this troubled earth....but it doesn't hurt to hope! Speaking of hope...I do hope you and your family had a wonderful holiday dear Abe, and all is well? Congratulations on this thoughtful, and insightful poem on the featured page! Hugs...Carrie

Janette Fisher

January 10, 2010 at 11:56 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Debbie Guzzi

September 19, 2009 at 5:31 AM

B. C. a period set ensconced with out rampant strife days near death end life.......... Be careful what you wish for....Light & Love

James Fraser

September 11, 2009 at 8:57 AM

Decent people should never be allowed to struggle, yet drug lords rich it up, super Senyru Abe>>James

Sharon Winter

July 7, 2009 at 8:28 AM

Good luck with that one Abe. Wishing for you and me both. Sent you soup mail the other day, just checking you received. Hope your wife is feeling well. Hugs, Shar xoxo