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Nor Flowing Script

My mind is too pragmatic; it cannot work the magic of allusion, illusion, nor flowing script. When was my heart last ripped open in love-lost-anguish or slipped into unexpected passion? I am unable to refashion the impulsive neuronal transmissions to create a cage of desire or the heights to which you aspire.

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Date: 3/8/2024 4:07:00 PM
I can relate to part of what you're saying. Sometimes I'm too logical to write effectively. Sometimes an emotional event or even a trauma kills my passion. Not sure what the point is here...I guess your poem sparked some thoughts. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/8/2024 6:28:00 PM
Thank you. It is just comparing my writing of poetry to the writings of others and I just write in plain English and more musical phasing escapes me.

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