Nor' Easter

The wind is break dancing with the trees. beating a rapper’s song. Limbs flail on the tarmac. Rain flies like sweat from corn rows across the expanse of asphalt. A barrage precipitates against the window pane with the rata-tat-tat of a machine gun’s bullets as the front passes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mitchell Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 3:58 AM
Great descriptive use of words! Your poem made the storm 'real' to me. I greatly enjoyed this!... Thank you for your comment on my poem :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 2:36 PM
Very descriptive and expressive write. I can feel, hear, and see the rain and wind. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Brown Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Deborah to me this is another of your best poems. I truly enjoyed reading it today. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 7:13 PM
You have truly captured the workings of a "Nor'easter, Deborah! Great job you've done here! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem! This goes to my favs.! Peace and love, Audrey
Loving Iii Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 6:08 PM
a small airport is what i see. john
Bono Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 1:32 PM
awesome..new poem posted
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