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Noontime Showers-Cq

showers at noon drip through our heels-- carving footprints on leaf- whisked mud * taking boots off cleansed by soft dew-- we pause 'neath oaks to learn rain's dance 8/5.2019 Charles Messina's Charlie-Quadku Contest

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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 1/8/2020 10:48:00 PM
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I love it. A rain dance at noon. Kind wishes, Kai
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/20/2019 5:52:00 PM
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gorgeous one, Nette. Congrats on the win.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/19/2019 8:41:00 PM
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I could smell the rain and earth. Beautiful quad-Ku’s Congrats. Hugs, SuZ
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Constance La France
Date: 9/18/2019 11:34:00 AM
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Nette, congratulations on your win, excellent **
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2019 11:08:00 AM
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- Congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/18/2019 6:32:00 AM
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Beautiful poem, Nette. Love the imagery :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs // Charlie
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/6/2019 2:18:00 PM
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If showers inspire you always like this, Nette, let them come more often!! Both these Quadku are beautiful; their endings are delightful! Hugs // paul
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Matthew Anish
Date: 9/6/2019 2:18:00 PM
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Fine short poems but American haiku are 5 7 5 so I don't know if I would call them haiku. Nice nature imagery in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/6/2019 12:46:00 PM
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Love the imagery nette.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2019 11:25:00 AM
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Very nice Nette! Well done :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2019 8:25:00 AM
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Beautiful imagery..all the best, Nette.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/6/2019 6:51:00 AM
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This had a rhythmic beat to it Nette love it!;)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 4:09:00 AM
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- ... cleansed by soft dew ... beautiful, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/6/2019 3:45:00 AM
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"carving footprints on leaf- whisked mud" - this is so whimsically written, and this part especially makes it come alive.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/6/2019 3:21:00 AM
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A whimsical charm enjoyed--Beautiful Nette ~ Aloha always William
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