Noodling

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noodling through moonseed half crescent under my arms your eyes are the stars 8/21/2020

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Date: 8/22/2020 3:18:00 AM

Noodling, I haven’t heard that in years, beautiful image great jobKim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2020 9:25:00 AM

Thank you, Mark!

Date: 8/22/2020 1:06:00 AM

oh so cuteeeee!!! I love this der Kim..Definitely a FAVE!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2020 9:24:00 AM

Thank you, JCB

Date: 8/21/2020 8:53:00 PM

Enchanting! I feel this is about a small child looking up at you with loving, adoring eyes. Anyway, it makes me smile and that is good.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2020 9:24:00 AM

Thank you! Lovely thought.

Date: 8/21/2020 3:42:00 PM

A stellar senryu, Kim! Here's to oodles of noodles! ~ Apple Strudeling

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 4:10:00 PM

LOL! Thank you..ooo...ooo...hoo!

Date: 8/21/2020 1:20:00 PM

- Oh ... lovely, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 1:41:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)