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Noodling

noodling through moonseed half crescent under my arms your eyes are the stars 8/21/2020
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Koplin Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 3:18 AM
Noodling, I haven’t heard that in years, beautiful image great jobKim
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Brul Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:06 AM
oh so cuteeeee!!! I love this der Kim..Definitely a FAVE!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Thank you, JCB
DiMino Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Enchanting! I feel this is about a small child looking up at you with loving, adoring eyes. Anyway, it makes me smile and that is good.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Thank you! Lovely thought.
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 3:42 PM
A stellar senryu, Kim! Here's to oodles of noodles! ~ Apple Strudeling
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 4:10 PM
LOL! Thank you..ooo...ooo...hoo!
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 1:20 PM
- Oh ... lovely, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
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