Non-Traditional Feasting

Yummy old "Nathan's" hot dogs
Just the dogs and buns
Good dogs snap when you bite them
So dip in water
Before you shove down
Vomit, you
Lose!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 4:06 AM
Dropping back with my congrats - one meal i wouldn't enjoy but I loved the humour:-) Hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 11:40 PM
I had to read this twice to quite understand the ending, but I think I get it now. Loved line three and the ending is kind of clever, so I put it on the list despite the fact it does not make me drool at all. hahaha. Congrats, John.
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 6:22 PM
not quite my idea of a festive meal lol:-) Hugs Jan x
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