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Nonsense

Strawberry whines and lemon hearts Verry emotional sensations. What kind of soup are you?? I think I might be a New England clam chowder. Heavy cream whipped till fluffy, irish potatoes, clam with a chance of grit! If I was a dessert, I would like to be a strawberry pie with lots of whipped cream.... Strawberry poet cake Watermelon rhymes and basil ballads a spicy read indeed!

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/9/2011 3:15:00 PM

OH.! yes Doris you have got me thinking, and enjoyed the write so much...

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/10/2011 6:12:00 PM

ahhh... a fruity-creamy gal with a tart edge of zip! very sweet! :)

James Tate

Date: 8/3/2011 5:44:00 PM

I like the light humor and use of metaphors. Thanks for your comments on my turtle poem. In regard to my long line of intro. I wrote it in four lines, but for some reason it displayed as one long line. I may have it corrected by double spacing each line.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2011 1:09:00 PM

Interesting one..This reminded me of Janet Frame..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate the time spent there..I told your brother to call you and let you know that the dog killed the rooster...He said Princess went flying up there barking and having a fit..The bird flew over the fence and Stretch got him with one bit..I am sorry about that..He is going to have to be watched because he is going to be a killer..Mom

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/28/2011 4:53:00 AM

really enjoyed your flight of fancy here Doris, and thanks for the comment, "am so busy now" but will try to keep in touch..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/27/2011 7:55:00 AM

Wow Doris, you'll made me smile! Great idea of a strawberry pie with whipped cream!!! Loved it!

Don Johnson

Date: 7/25/2011 1:49:00 AM

nonsense i love, cos im not above, sidesteppin away from reality, interesting poem babe, xo, Don

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2011 10:13:00 AM

Enjoyed reading the words which flowed from you pen today Doris. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

John Smith

Date: 7/20/2011 7:35:00 PM

You make me hungry. My two fav 'poetry' soups are potato and tomato; they rhyme and taste so good.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/20/2011 7:03:00 PM

Perofound analogies with high humor and wit, Doris