Nonsense

Strawberry whines and lemon hearts
   Verry emotional sensations.

What kind of soup are you??
           I think I might be a New England clam chowder.
Heavy cream whipped till fluffy, irish potatoes, clam with a chance of grit!

If I was a dessert, I would like to be a strawberry pie with lots of whipped cream....
                     Strawberry poet cake

Watermelon rhymes and basil ballads
                   a spicy read indeed!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Maverick Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 3:15 PM
OH.! yes Doris you have got me thinking, and enjoyed the write so much...
Jones Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 6:12 PM
ahhh... a fruity-creamy gal with a tart edge of zip! very sweet! :)
Tate Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 5:44 PM
I like the light humor and use of metaphors. Thanks for your comments on my turtle poem. In regard to my long line of intro. I wrote it in four lines, but for some reason it displayed as one long line. I may have it corrected by double spacing each line.
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Interesting one..This reminded me of Janet Frame..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate the time spent there..I told your brother to call you and let you know that the dog killed the rooster...He said Princess went flying up there barking and having a fit..The bird flew over the fence and Stretch got him with one bit..I am sorry about that..He is going to have to be watched because he is going to be a killer..Mom
Maverick Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 4:53 AM
really enjoyed your flight of fancy here Doris, and thanks for the comment, "am so busy now" but will try to keep in touch..
Knop Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 7:55 AM
Wow Doris, you'll made me smile! Great idea of a strawberry pie with whipped cream!!! Loved it!
Johnson Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 1:49 AM
nonsense i love, cos im not above, sidesteppin away from reality, interesting poem babe, xo, Don
Brown Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Enjoyed reading the words which flowed from you pen today Doris. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 7:35 PM
You make me hungry. My two fav 'poetry' soups are potato and tomato; they rhyme and taste so good.
Mehta Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 7:03 PM
Perofound analogies with high humor and wit, Doris
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