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Nonreciprocal

I give ~

They take~

Disappointment~

Will l ever learn~

Never ~

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Mike Gentile

Date: 11/17/2023 10:59:00 AM

So sorry that you've been disappointed Deb!! Your poem packs a lot of punch ! You nailed your feeling with so few words and that's hard to do!! Happy Friday xxoo

Deb M
Date: 11/17/2023 12:32:00 PM

Thanks Mike…..l think all givers get disappointed along the way in life….doesn't stop us though hehe! Always a pleasure! Debx

Ink Empress

Date: 11/17/2023 10:10:00 AM

Everytime i read your poems i feel Like you speak for me, this hits home. And is so true, sometimes i wonder too do i ever learn. But having some people who remind me to remember helps me. Love how you’ve said so much in few words. Always a pleasure reading you. Sending you light talented soul

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 1:20:00 PM

Awwn let me try to soupmail maybe cus we dont follow each other

Deb M
Date: 11/17/2023 12:18:00 PM

Hi IE l really wanted to Soupmail you but you dont have it l see. Thankyou for always making me feel my basic poems can affect someone and make them feel something….l am truly thankful for your kind and sincere comments IE and know they are from a genuine honest heart! Thankyou….Debx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/17/2023 9:50:00 AM

I've learned to give only the things that I don't need. Be always careful.

Deb M
Date: 11/17/2023 12:27:00 PM

I give alot of myself Hilda and that won’t ever change lm afraid! Thankyou Hilda and nice to meet you! Debx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/17/2023 6:52:00 AM

Saintly vibes you convey my friend. Be as you are!

Deb M
Date: 11/17/2023 7:17:00 AM

Far from saintly vijay honestly…..just one of millions of kind hearted humans in this world….who gets disappointed at times. Thanks lovely friend! Deb

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/17/2023 2:12:00 AM

And feel guilty for thinking you mustn't feel this way when you know how a little reciprocation could take away the bad thoughts you have and warm your heart and the takers too! Another good one Deb Take care, Old Duck XX

Deb M
Date: 11/17/2023 4:24:00 AM

You are a giver this l know my lovely Shirley! Always love your comments…..Debx