Non-Hodgkins Lymphoma : a Gogyohka

days become short 
and carry cold promise
the curve of your breast
anchoring my memory
in sunshine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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artlyy Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 8:50 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 6:07 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 10:19 PM
KEVIN, a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in BRIAN'S' contest..... always~ PD
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:26 PM
ty Poet~D tbh - i thought contest was ending late august, this caught me by surprise
Augustus Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 1:51 PM
This is a beautifully written piece about such an ugly disease. It's almost like a love poem. Congratulations on an extremely well deserved win.
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:26 PM
ty Brandee it is indeed a love poem :- )
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Sad one..Cancer the horrible disease..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:43 PM
ty Sara cancer is horrible, but of all the cancers - this sometimes is the jackpot
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "#191"contest Kevin. Love, Carol
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:28 PM
ty Carol it surprised me -smiles -
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 10:51 PM
Congratulations for your win with this reflective tanka
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:29 PM
ty Andrea i hafta admit, the asian forms appeal
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 8:32 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win with this touching write. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:40 PM
ty Rhonda truth is, few of us escape being touched by this in one way or other
Guzzi Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 3:26 PM
very sad congrad's Light & Love
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:44 PM
ty Debbie a gentle sadness is all
Williams Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Kevin congrats on your win...David
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:54 PM
ty David it was unexpected
Johnson Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your win with this serious subject. love, Joyce
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:56 PM
ty Joyce a subject many would prefer to avoid, i suspect?
Grisetti Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Wonderful poem about a deadly subject. Congratulations on yoour win.
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 5:10 PM
and a PS ty for commenting, i forgot to mention in my initial response :- )
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 5:08 PM
aah Joann in a sense i didn't see it that way, i wrote it as a love poem and was a tad surprised that it was also about cancer
Gooden Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Congrats on your win, Kevin.
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 5:12 PM
ty Sherese am not always happy with my writing, but this one pleased me
Rozario Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 7:12 AM
congrats on your win Kevin
Sharpe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 5:28 PM
ty Jonas this one means a lot to me
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