Laura Breidenthal Poet Haiku

None Touched

clouds and cliffs
below a million flowers
and none touched

one petal 
falls amongst the wilted gone
soon will crisp

sad flowers
waiting for spring to lift them
and none touched

4-29-13

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David Scott June 10, 2013 at 12:07 PM REMINDS ME OF MY SEASONS WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT

Duke Beaufort May 18, 2013 at 5:27 PM Hey the flowers are the sexual parts of the plant. If they have not done their job, that is indeed sad.

Eileen Manassian May 6, 2013 at 2:06 PM Beautiful, my dear. So nice that sometimes we can just leave nature untouched and enjoy the beauty! :) Hugs!

Opondi Ougo May 2, 2013 at 2:31 AM I smell spring...:-) Deep piece you've penned here Laura.thanks a lot and nice times :-)

Poet Destroyer A May 1, 2013 at 9:35 AM a beautiful one Laura,...always~ Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 3:23 AM - Laura, this was lovely - Untouched and new, gives spring a second chance. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)