None Bothers

I sulk I cry none bothers, they care a fig
although I slog in the house as if a pig
untiringly serve them day n night
they ignore all that outright
if I demand attention or take recourse to crying
they feel some tactics I'm applying
I can't  see them morose but  smile
Sometimes I just want them to sit with me for a while
none has the intention or time
they feel they have other things prime
will have to live like this lonely
learn to live on my own solely
cant they see  I too work hard 
all my pleasures are thus marred 
except for some attention
I've no material intention
how long can I thus  function 
I feel lost n companionless at this junction
to unwind I've tried meditation
it gives me little or no peace I'll say without hesitation
what do I  do wither shall I go
I want some time they must know
Always when  I am annoyed I forgive 
As with love together  we must live
We must live with the policy of forgive n forget
This  is the way family life remains set
If one doesn't  forgive tensions build 
If a heart  is broken, it takes long to be healed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/19/2017 8:51:00 PM
I really felt the 'pain' in this piece . I sense a sort of detachment from loved ones that you don't wish to have.
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Date: 9/2/2017 7:40:00 AM
Well yes .One has to carry on .All the same thank you for reviewing my work. Kindly go through a poem titled stream I just posted it .
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