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I’m gonna count up to ten I won’t ask you again Now turn in your gear Get the hell out of here And never come back here amen. For Poems to Movies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/31/2010 12:28:00 PM
Koolio Limerick Ralph, many congratulations on your 7th place in Matt's contest >> James
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Date: 5/21/2010 12:21:00 PM
LOl a real good funny macho write! Light 7 Love
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Date: 5/20/2010 4:05:00 AM
witty--
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Date: 5/19/2010 7:52:00 PM
good limerick, Ralph. Very to the point too!! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/19/2010 9:23:00 AM
Cute Limerick Ralph but u better check the rules as u have to use Matt's lines in the beginning incoporated into your poem like a dialogue... maybe u could add it to your Limerick... good luck in the contest... luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/19/2010 8:31:00 AM
Great limerick, Ralph! I can only imagine the movie script that would be based on this write. Somehow it takes me back to Mork from Ork and his disputes with his superiors on his home planet. Wishing you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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