Non-Spaceman

I’m gonna count up to ten
I won’t ask you again
        Now turn in your gear
         Get the hell out of here
And never come back here amen.					
	
					
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Koolio Limerick Ralph, many congratulations on your 7th place in Matt's contest >> James
Guzzi Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 12:21 PM
LOl a real good funny macho write! Light 7 Love
Culverhouse Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 4:05 AM
witty--
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 7:52 PM
good limerick, Ralph. Very to the point too!! LUv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Cute Limerick Ralph but u better check the rules as u have to use Matt's lines in the beginning incoporated into your poem like a dialogue... maybe u could add it to your Limerick... good luck in the contest... luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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May 19, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Great limerick, Ralph! I can only imagine the movie script that would be based on this write. Somehow it takes me back to Mork from Ork and his disputes with his superiors on his home planet. Wishing you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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