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Nomad

Like a nomad trespassing woodland's edge, I rip moonbeams apart ; drain the pulp of my marrow , shapeless— wandering along tracks of old interludes in mid Autumn's light. And as the elixir of a world dilutes flawed refrains through a self-alienation endured; a pounding gust turns midnight into a wayward trance. I was so close to the rhythm of myself, this navel unbuttoned and numb by aimless wanderings still, still...I took absence of me; again. 11/13/2015 The Journey Begins Matt Calliri's Contest

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Date: 11/21/2015 4:32:00 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats on your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 11/19/2015 4:28:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work...Enjoyedd reading it..Thanks for your visit..Sara
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Date: 11/17/2015 10:00:00 PM
congrats. SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2015 1:50:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win Nette!! Very wonderful poem!! Be blessed -LU xxx *smiles*
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Date: 11/17/2015 11:11:00 AM
befriending my angst to claim my roots…again. very nice :) Congrats Nette :)
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Date: 11/17/2015 7:49:00 AM
Love the title Nette, as we are all nomads of a sort....searching for our future in the ruins of the past. Congrats on the top spot...
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Date: 11/17/2015 3:14:00 AM
Nice to see this lovely one on top nette,congrats on the win...hugs
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Date: 11/17/2015 12:16:00 AM
Congratulations nette!!
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Date: 11/17/2015 12:09:00 AM
Nice work on 1rst place!
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:32:00 AM
Yi - Outstanding, Nette. I believe I could read this over and over and find more and more meaning each time. Your poem is so deep that each line deserves thought and reflection as so much is poetically revealed ... CayCay Yi - love it
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Date: 11/13/2015 11:48:00 PM
Nette, I am at a loss for words, this is magical, buddha, zen, relaxing and thought provoking! :) hugs
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Date: 11/13/2015 6:40:00 PM
Another elegant metaphoric write that touches this reader to the core, Nette. Awesome final line. 7, of course. hugs!
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Date: 11/13/2015 8:35:00 AM
Masterfully crafted poem that its beauty cannot pass unnoticed! Certainly a winner! A seven, dear nette!
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Date: 11/13/2015 8:26:00 AM
I expect this artful expression to do well.
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Date: 11/13/2015 3:52:00 AM
Wow! This raw self-examination comes from the heart. Astounding poetry with distinct, primitive imagery!
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