Noisy When Touched

Sunrises with a different color this morning
Pale pink whispy clouds adorn all the upper sky
A very small crescent moon in the southeasterly sky
Where the morning star resides this time of year

The mist rising from the creek Seems to mingle
With the mist from the smaller
Creek one-quarter mile away
Beyond is the pink striated with gray on the low horizon

I heard the gobbling of turkeys 
Or is that hunters doing their calls
Do the turkeys know the difference
If they don't their number is up

As the great star comes on up
The light pierces the golden hickory
Radiating the glory from that tree
Into my line of vision just a few minutes

In the front yard the hugh oaks
Lay down a rug decorated with leaves
Varying colors of tan, brown, and red
It is a noisy rug that crunches when touched
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
November 15, 2009 at 12:27 AM
A clourful poem especiall verse 1 Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
Haick Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Good imagery, Sara! Thanks for your comments on my poem! Peace and love, Audrey
Culverhouse Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 12:05 PM
enjoyed reading today, thanks
Strand Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today Sara.Rgds Brian
Gumbo Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 8:26 AM
Nicely done! as you say, keep writing :)
Sheart Avatar
November 14, 2009 at 7:51 AM
Outstanding write Sara, one of my fav. Love Light Patty
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