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Nocturnal Occlusion

wobbling
    anecdotal
         narrative
             conspicuously
                         from
                  nature's
             vernal
         threads,
     twisting
stitching
an
ornamental
    of
      bucolic
         rustic
             quintessence 
                  whispered
           yarns
        of
    spring
relics

rains
    bottleneck
         processing
             seal 
                 blubber
                        in
                       hollowed 
                            space
                              still 
                      withholding
                    still 
                shut
          mercy 
       of 
rain
  silence 
     depth
             &
             night 
                 abyss
                      questions 
                 throbbing
             &
         blunders 
    resurface
in
    search 
         of 
             peace
                 built 
                   bridge 
                       on
                         mountains
                                   &
                            climbed 
                      streams
                  hunting
            peace 
         to 
 breathe
      believe
          air 
             was real
                 dreams 
                reconciled
                  unique
              comfortable
           place          
      laying
           on your     
             heart
               to           
              feel
           your   
       pulse
        &
 love


Written: February 18, 2023

YOUR CHOICE AGAIN Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick February 22, 2023 at 7:47 AM Congratulations on your poem being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara

Valsa George February 21, 2023 at 5:40 AM Congratulations dear Lasaad on your win in Brian's contest!

Jennifer Proxenos February 19, 2023 at 8:10 AM Your pic resembles when we go on a night drive in the Kruger National park, not allowed on our own, the park has their own special ranger and jeeps take you on a two hour night drive. Animals, a full moon at night - we say is a predator s delight - spring and dry trees from a dry previous Winter, and rain in the dark, all play a role in this winding clever adventure, a masterpiece of a poem! 'Hunting peace to breathe, dreams reconciled, unique comfortable place laying on your heart to feel your pulse and love' A fav. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit February 19, 2023 at 5:49 AM A worthwhile journey that leads to the ending of your poem my friend--dreams reconciled unique comfortable place laying on your heart to feel your pulse & love.

Valsa George February 19, 2023 at 1:34 AM Nature and spring wonderfully captured in your inimitable style ! Words flow like a cascading stream. A beautiful entry ! All the Best dear Lasaad

Victor Buhagiar February 19, 2023 at 1:29 AM Great poem, Seems like a serpent, though.

Stephan McBride February 18, 2023 at 4:07 PM Wow ,my friend, this is amazing, from the pictures,down into the flowing poem