Nocturnal Occlusion

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wobbling anecdotal narrative conspicuously from nature's vernal threads, twisting stitching an ornamental of bucolic rustic quintessence whispered yarns of spring relics rains bottleneck processing seal blubber in hollowed space still withholding still shut mercy of rain silence depth & night abyss questions throbbing & blunders resurface in search of peace built bridge on mountains & climbed streams hunting peace to breathe believe air was real dreams reconciled unique comfortable place laying on your heart to feel your pulse & love Written: February 18, 2023 YOUR CHOICE AGAIN Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2023 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 2/21/2023 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations dear Lasaad on your win in Brian's contest!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/19/2023 8:10:00 AM

Your pic resembles when we go on a night drive in the Kruger National park, not allowed on our own, the park has their own special ranger and jeeps take you on a two hour night drive. Animals, a full moon at night - we say is a predator s delight - spring and dry trees from a dry previous Winter, and rain in the dark, all play a role in this winding clever adventure, a masterpiece of a poem! 'Hunting peace to breathe, dreams reconciled, unique comfortable place laying on your heart to feel your pulse and love' A fav. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2023 5:49:00 AM

A worthwhile journey that leads to the ending of your poem my friend--dreams reconciled unique comfortable place laying on your heart to feel your pulse & love.

Valsa George

Date: 2/19/2023 1:34:00 AM

Nature and spring wonderfully captured in your inimitable style ! Words flow like a cascading stream. A beautiful entry ! All the Best dear Lasaad

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/19/2023 1:29:00 AM

Great poem, Seems like a serpent, though.

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/18/2023 4:07:00 PM

Wow ,my friend, this is amazing, from the pictures,down into the flowing poem