Nobody

Nobody  -              poem                                             
Here I wonder
Why god has given thunder mind
It doesn’t obey to me
Whirling me on wheel fastly moving
All seems like one  paint tool no time  
To stop for a while my belongings
So nearest but  uncatchable,
And when this magic wheel stops
Suppose death is  standing  nearby you
Even though I failed to do whatever
With that night to end the chapter
Truth is immortal then why I thought
To kill her
That is what I unable to grasp
Where is hell and where is heaven
How to open door of heart for whom?
Call me innocent or foolish
But nothing know or all done unknowingly
Sharp awareness with moment and witnessing only
Happenings, don’t know where me drive?
And this burden on my wings of mind
Later dislike me and throw clothes also
To live as nobody of this world naked.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/21/2016 3:51:00 PM
shivaji pandhare, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Shivaji Pandhare
Date: 2/22/2016 8:44:00 AM
thanks you enjoyed and read my poem, andd your vallble inspiraton compel me to write better than this thanks dear friend linda
Date: 1/20/2016 8:35:00 PM
Shivaji, it's nice to meet you Thanks for what you said about my scary poem. this one seems a bit scary as well!! you must like that subject matter!! this is a deep poem.
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:54:00 AM
thanks dear Andrea you like and read my poem and gave wonderful comment, and i also thirsty of those loving words because i newly admitted in poetrysoup hospital and god knows hen it wuld core my heart? thanks again so sweet of you dear Andrea.
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