Nobodies Home

The walls resonate like the inside of a brass bell. Footfalls act as the clapper bouncing sound like a ping pong ball from wall to wall. The antique oriental rug with its dragon vase had long left, the black enameled troche no longer lit the floor in puddles of orange light. Hollowed out, the place was…. scooped like a cantaloupe free of the seeds of man, of childish laughter and parental spats. Dust bunnies scurry in the late afternoon through the sunlight from dirty window panes. Spiders weave webs in the corners of long forgotten dreams… Soon, all too soon, this will be the case, the leaving will come footfalls will lead to the last closing, the brass doorknob will no longer reflect my face and the emptiness will fill with the dreams of a new family...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/29/2013 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win. AO
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Date: 5/29/2013 1:21:00 PM
you have a home-- this world and more...congrats on your fine win!..:) hugggs
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Date: 5/29/2013 11:52:00 AM
I'm sure your spirit and smile will linger to ensure happiness...congratulations Debbie
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Date: 5/28/2013 8:00:00 PM
Well done. I didn't even miss the rhyme. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:03:00 PM
great write....congrats on your win
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:26:00 PM
- Thanks for letting me visit your home - Congratulations on your win in the contest: "A Home" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:17:00 PM
My big hearty congratulations my dear friend , Deb for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt Caliri's "Empty Apartment" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2010 12:42:00 PM
Home is where the heart is and mine is still here, yet, trying to get my head around the idea it won't be for much longer.
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Date: 12/18/2010 8:47:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your super win in the Empty Apt. contest with yet another great entry TEACH.. enjoy sweet victory with luv..
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Date: 12/18/2010 10:12:00 AM
Hi Deborah. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Eamon
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Date: 12/17/2010 11:19:00 PM
The clapper bouncing like a ping pong ball from wall to wall. /the place was…. scooped like a cantaloupe free of the seeds of man, of childish laughter and parental spats. How original and impressive!!! Congrats, my Lady ...
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Date: 12/17/2010 11:45:00 AM
Very nice imagery in this poem and the emotions tug at our heartstrings. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/17/2010 11:31:00 AM
deborah, what an amazing piece... bouquets for you in bagging this award!! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:21:00 PM
what are you mourning here Deborah, so full of regret and mourning...
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:37:00 AM
Beautiful write dear poet ! much love, james
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:56:00 AM
I was quite taken with this poem and the atmosphere you created in such brevity. It is sad, yes, but also so very, very haunting. This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Thank you.
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:56:00 PM
Welcome back. How was the trip to Egypt. You have rbought quite a good pieces like this one, Deb
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:11:00 PM
This piece has everything in it Deb.. metaphors and comparisons galore and a taste of irony looking back to the way things used to be.. intense dramatic words and lines luv..
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