Noble Knight

My love,
You are the honey I put in my sandwich.
You are the rose I avoid to step on.
You are so digestive.
You have a glowing smile.
Your smell is better than Channel perfumes,
so I don’t have to buy you Channel.
You are my apple I love to eat.
You cause sounds of bombs in my room
because you make me explode in laughter.
You melt when you are shy.
You are not short in your duties.
You are my heart’s beat.
You are my Aspirin. 
I love you.

P.S: Oh Love, forgive my writing, because I just came out of my first English course   
       and I wanted to share my joy with you =D

Sincerely, 
              Noble Knight  

*Digestive: humorous.
*Short in your duties: late in duties.
*The P.S is the Noble Knight himself talking and telling his beloved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Burton Avatar
December 25, 2008 at 6:04 AM
Great poetry and i hope that course went well for you and also that you are really great writer and sorry i havenet really been making comments, i love the trail of your poetry. Every. Its like a road, eccept i read it back wards.
Higgins Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 8:15 AM
Yep! I should have the p.s.. even better.
Moreno Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 7:30 AM
Nice poem...Raul
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December 16, 2008 at 7:16 AM
No need to explain anything my friend. This poem rocks!! I love the Channel bit..it had me laughing. Poetry in my humble opinion is a universal tongue, created from within that others may or may not be able to decipher. You hold the keys to your words..and that is all that matters.
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