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Noah's Ark

Noah marched all creatures in the ark two-by-twos, Including bugs, elephants and a pair of fiesty gnus! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Entry for Debbie Guzzi's "Two Timers" Contest

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/14/2012 2:11:00 PM

What is a Gnu???

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2012 8:28:00 PM

Bob H., he forgot the unicorn :-(..... love your couplet... always....pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2012 2:28:00 AM

A PERFECT VISION RECALLING THIS BIBLE READ BOB .. ALWAYS A TOUCH OF WIT MY FRIEND .. ALSO READ BALLAD OF PROSPECTOR PETE .. ANOTHER MESMERIZING POETIC TALE LUV .. SOMEHOW I COULD NOT COMMENT ON IT DIRECTLY .. HOW IS MRS. DOING?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/19/2012 7:43:00 AM

I had to look up gnu to see what that happened to be..An antelope like stocky ox..They are on the endangered species list now..Noah saved them and now they are endangered..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I stopped by..Sara

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/18/2012 4:40:00 PM

ha! this is a very fun poem...

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/18/2012 4:27:00 PM

Oh , this is good. Glad to see a post from you..hope all is well. Vera feeling better? BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/18/2012 12:58:00 PM

Ha ha, I loved this wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed this delightful and appealing poem Bob! You sure can come up with some great ones! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/18/2012 10:40:00 AM

‡ Hello Dear Sweet Precious Robert. I Must Admit When In Noticing Your Categories Labeled As Animals And Funny I Thought Of Lucifer And His Bobble Head Doll Collection, LOL. As For Your Loving Heart's Verse I Am Somewhat Certain That Noah Had A Quite An Adventure With Some Of Those Wild Creatures And I Am Not Refering Unto The Animals, LOL. Can You Imagine What It Was Like On That Vessel *;* Me Oh My. Sweet Kisses To You, Rachel ‡