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No Urgency

No Urgency

An urgent care doctor told me
Black eyes are no huge urgency
Can be if they're real...
Did just now reveal
Eye makeup has spread flagrantly!

January 10, 2019

Contest: Limerick II
Sponsor: Joseph May
Theme: Doctor
Used: ABCDE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 7:56 PM
what a fun poem to go with the picture. Big congrats on your win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! It was a fun one to write. Hugs, Sandra
Devonshire Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 8:31 AM
Oh, I remember seeing those raccoon eyes back when I was younger and had partied the night before. Funny limerick, Sandra. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Haight Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 5:43 PM
Yes, Carolyn, I guess we all remember those days! Glad you liked my Limerick, and I appreciate your visit and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 5:22 PM
A great poem, Sandra, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. A funny one! Hugs, Sandra
Laurie Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 4:09 PM
G'day Sandra … nicely written about a topic that maybe not common but does stand out - thank you Sandra - Lindsay
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Thank you very much for your visit, Lindsay, and your supportive comment! Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Time for big sunglasses Sandra, Good luck in the contest. Tom.
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 8:42 AM
For sure, Tom! Thanks for the visit and good luck! Sandra :)
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Lol Sandra I love that punch line lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Thanks, Jan. It was fun to think up! Hugs, Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Ha! So good! Good luck in the contest :) xomo
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 8:11 AM
LOL I like this, Sandra. Good one.
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, Line. A fun one for sure. Hugs, Sandra
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