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Dedicated to Dana
(i will change the title when i find a good one, in the mean time try giving me some ides please)

i know you have fallen
i know your hurt
but i want you to see the bright side
dont let all this pain drag you down
it will only ensure your demise
so please
believe with me
you are strong
you can make it
people may say that the power of darkness
is way to great
but i say if you can live and love
then the darkness cant have won
it's only as strong as you let it be
so please don't leave me be
you will only be hurting me
and your family
ask yourself constantly
is this what i want to be?
is this what it has come to?
i know this is one lowsy poem
but i hope you can see
the message and heart
i put into these
rythem and rhymes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 18, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Good poem, Jordan. Your emotion is strong and sincere :) eve
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