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Fields of gold and green

Pumpkin-born on twisted vine

Surprising beauty



Once again I missed the contest...sigh

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Michael Jordan

May 18, 2010 at 11:20 AM

Barbara, It is a beautiful sight, I planted a small garden this year and love to sit out under my peach tree and watch it grow, smile. I have one more week of school and my first year is behind me, yea. Thank you for your continued support and friendship, YF4L, God Bless, mj

Sara Kendrick

May 18, 2010 at 10:01 AM

It would have been in the winning circle I'm sure...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

May 18, 2010 at 7:44 AM

By the way, Karen informed me that haiku are not supposed to have titles. You're a step ahead of me in the learning process. Love, CD

Carolyn Devonshire

May 18, 2010 at 7:42 AM

Dear LNC, I don't even know which contest this was so I guess I missed it too! I do like the imagery of the pumpkin patch. Saw them growing and enjoyed romping through the "fields of gold and green" as a child in NJ. Wonderful haiku, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

May 17, 2010 at 6:26 PM

That is so sad, cause, this haiku, is very pretty... I am sending soup mail.. constance

May 17, 2010 at 4:17 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative perspective. Don't feel bad about missing the contest. I can't seem to keep up with them all either. By the time I get an idea sometimes, it's over. Glad you still decided to share your poem with us. Karen