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Fields of gold and green Pumpkin-born on twisted vine Surprising beauty Once again I missed the contest...sigh

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Michael Jordan

Date: 5/18/2010 11:20:00 AM

Barbara, It is a beautiful sight, I planted a small garden this year and love to sit out under my peach tree and watch it grow, smile. I have one more week of school and my first year is behind me, yea. Thank you for your continued support and friendship, YF4L, God Bless, mj

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2010 10:01:00 AM

It would have been in the winning circle I'm sure...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2010 7:44:00 AM

By the way, Karen informed me that haiku are not supposed to have titles. You're a step ahead of me in the learning process. Love, CD

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2010 7:42:00 AM

Dear LNC, I don't even know which contest this was so I guess I missed it too! I do like the imagery of the pumpkin patch. Saw them growing and enjoyed romping through the "fields of gold and green" as a child in NJ. Wonderful haiku, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 5/17/2010 6:26:00 PM

That is so sad, cause, this haiku, is very pretty... I am sending soup mail.. constance

Date: 5/17/2010 4:17:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative perspective. Don't feel bad about missing the contest. I can't seem to keep up with them all either. By the time I get an idea sometimes, it's over. Glad you still decided to share your poem with us. Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2010 3:31:00 AM

Really nice images conveying explicit meanings

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/17/2010 2:30:00 AM

Nice work BG, love the middle line...Raul