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at dawn, in the mirror, she gazes intently into her own eyes- - she decides against make up.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/10/2011 12:29:00 AM

Lovely enough without it! Nice feeling this gives.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/30/2010 7:30:00 AM

Good decision and a nice Monoku, Robert! And thanks for your comments...Gert

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2010 8:49:00 PM

A realization of some sort?, nice one, enjoyed your write...P.D.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Robert. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:30:00 AM

Nice one, Robert. , Excellent writing! (As usual.) Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/8/2010 8:11:00 PM

Congrats on the win

John Beam

Date: 5/6/2010 8:15:00 PM

congrats was that in the car lol thanks for comment

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/6/2010 12:19:00 AM

congratulations on your placing Robert...A nice theme ...Margaret

Joe Flach

Date: 5/5/2010 9:30:00 PM

Well done Robert. Congrats on your win.

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 5/5/2010 6:53:00 PM

I Love it Robert!!!! It says so much!! Congratulations on your WIN!!!! Unique!!! Excellent! Jeralynn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:17:00 PM

wow, robert, this is quite profound in that one long line. Congratulations for winning with this cool write! LUv, andrea

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/5/2010 3:04:00 PM

This one is thought provoking. Is she alone? Will she step out? Does she like the way she looks? Has she given up? This is a good job of putting words together! Congratulations! RAY

Date: 5/5/2010 8:03:00 AM

What an interesting perspective. So much depth in just two lines. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Way to go. Enjoy your big success. Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/5/2010 7:54:00 AM

Great work Robert Congratulations on your big 2nd place. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/5/2010 7:38:00 AM

Certainly thought provoking, and well deserving a win! Congratulations, Robert! ~ love, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 5:57:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 4:55:00 AM

Very cute Robert and congrats on your taking 2nd place with this more than precious write and winning poem.. enjoy your special moment....with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2010 3:51:00 PM

Outstanding write today Robert. Thank you for your kind comments. I wish you the best with this poem should you enter it in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/3/2010 1:25:00 PM

Excellent imagery, Robert!! Such a pain, really..and sometimes can be a waste of time...Good luck in the contest with this beaut Monoku...Goes to my favs...Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2010 11:19:00 AM

From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing Robert. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/2/2010 6:57:00 PM

Good for her! Good luck in the contest, Robert. :-)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/2/2010 6:57:00 PM

Shes a better woman than I...I enjoyed this. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2010 6:23:00 PM

A nice expression. Good luck in the contest