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at dawn, in the mirror, she gazes intently into her own eyes-

                                                                     - she decides against make up.

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Elizabeth Wesley

October 10, 2011 at 12:29 AM

Lovely enough without it! Nice feeling this gives.

Gert W. Knop

June 30, 2010 at 7:30 AM

Good decision and a nice Monoku, Robert! And thanks for your comments...Gert

Poet Destroyer A

June 14, 2010 at 8:49 PM

A realization of some sort?, nice one, enjoyed your write...P.D.

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2010 at 11:47 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Robert. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 12, 2010 at 3:30 AM

Nice one, Robert. , Excellent writing! (As usual.) Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 8, 2010 at 8:11 PM

Congrats on the win

John Beam

May 6, 2010 at 8:15 PM

congrats was that in the car lol thanks for comment

Margaret Foster

May 6, 2010 at 12:19 AM

congratulations on your placing Robert...A nice theme ...Margaret

Joe Flach

May 5, 2010 at 9:30 PM

Well done Robert. Congrats on your win.

Jeralynn Clark

May 5, 2010 at 6:53 PM

I Love it Robert!!!! It says so much!! Congratulations on your WIN!!!! Unique!!! Excellent! Jeralynn

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2010 at 3:17 PM

wow, robert, this is quite profound in that one long line. Congratulations for winning with this cool write! LUv, andrea

Ray Dillard

May 5, 2010 at 3:04 PM

This one is thought provoking. Is she alone? Will she step out? Does she like the way she looks? Has she given up? This is a good job of putting words together! Congratulations! RAY

May 5, 2010 at 8:03 AM

What an interesting perspective. So much depth in just two lines. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Way to go. Enjoy your big success. Karen

Joyce Johnson

May 5, 2010 at 7:54 AM

Great work Robert Congratulations on your big 2nd place. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

May 5, 2010 at 7:38 AM

Certainly thought provoking, and well deserving a win! Congratulations, Robert! ~ love, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 5, 2010 at 5:57 AM

Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 5, 2010 at 4:55 AM

Very cute Robert and congrats on your taking 2nd place with this more than precious write and winning poem.. enjoy your special moment....with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 4, 2010 at 3:51 PM

Outstanding write today Robert. Thank you for your kind comments. I wish you the best with this poem should you enter it in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

May 3, 2010 at 1:25 PM

Excellent imagery, Robert!! Such a pain, really..and sometimes can be a waste of time...Good luck in the contest with this beaut Monoku...Goes to my favs...Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 3, 2010 at 11:19 AM

From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing Robert. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol