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at dawn, in the mirror, she gazes intently into her own eyes-

                                                                     - she decides against make up.

Copyright © Robert A. Dufresne | Year Posted 2010

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Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/10/2011 12:29:00 AM Lovely enough without it! Nice feeling this gives. Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 6/30/2010 7:30:00 AM Good decision and a nice Monoku, Robert! And thanks for your comments...Gert Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/14/2010 8:49:00 PM A realization of some sort?, nice one, enjoyed your write...P.D. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/18/2010 11:47:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Robert. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 5/12/2010 3:30:00 AM Nice one, Robert. , Excellent writing! (As usual.) Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/8/2010 8:11:00 PM Congrats on the win Login to Reply

John Beam Date: 5/6/2010 8:15:00 PM congrats was that in the car lol thanks for comment Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 5/6/2010 12:19:00 AM congratulations on your placing Robert...A nice theme ...Margaret Login to Reply

Joe Flach Date: 5/5/2010 9:30:00 PM Well done Robert. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Jeralynn Clark Date: 5/5/2010 6:53:00 PM I Love it Robert!!!! It says so much!! Congratulations on your WIN!!!! Unique!!! Excellent! Jeralynn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/5/2010 3:17:00 PM wow, robert, this is quite profound in that one long line. Congratulations for winning with this cool write! LUv, andrea Login to Reply

Ray Dillard Date: 5/5/2010 3:04:00 PM This one is thought provoking. Is she alone? Will she step out? Does she like the way she looks? Has she given up? This is a good job of putting words together! Congratulations! RAY Login to Reply

Date: 5/5/2010 8:03:00 AM What an interesting perspective. So much depth in just two lines. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Way to go. Enjoy your big success. Karen Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 5/5/2010 7:54:00 AM Great work Robert Congratulations on your big 2nd place. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/5/2010 7:38:00 AM Certainly thought provoking, and well deserving a win! Congratulations, Robert! ~ love, Carrie Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/5/2010 5:57:00 AM Congrats on the win Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/5/2010 4:55:00 AM Very cute Robert and congrats on your taking 2nd place with this more than precious write and winning poem.. enjoy your special moment....with luv from the "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/4/2010 3:51:00 PM Outstanding write today Robert. Thank you for your kind comments. I wish you the best with this poem should you enter it in Brian's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 5/3/2010 1:25:00 PM Excellent imagery, Robert!! Such a pain, really..and sometimes can be a waste of time...Good luck in the contest with this beaut Monoku...Goes to my favs...Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/3/2010 11:19:00 AM From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing Robert. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kim Hilliker Date: 5/2/2010 6:57:00 PM Good for her! Good luck in the contest, Robert. :-) Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/2/2010 6:57:00 PM Shes a better woman than I...I enjoyed this. BG Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/2/2010 6:23:00 PM A nice expression. Good luck in the contest Login to Reply