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David Crandall has me thinking about Leprechauns...lol

The Lep, has washed hands of St. Pat’s, does lean and fiddles in space, against tree, routine. The pot at the end of sun, was found a bit late; one won. Lep’s blind to the coot who handles gold-green. After his fiddling, is over and done, Lep gets to a-counting, his coins, for fun. He scratches his head, and blows his stack, as he rips his clothes. On hunt, Lep will go, round up rat, with gun. Not fair, when the sun has gone down; coot cheats. Now poor, Lep must find ev’ry coin on streets. The pot, has been stirred, like bees; emptied by the rat - he’ll seize. Lep’s gun (is a cane) - an instrument that beats. The fool and Lep’s money was found..tick-tock. “If you found my gold, before snooze of clock, then all would be fair…it’s not. If I have a gun, you’re shot. Instead, you, I cane, outline you with chalk.” Old coot, parts with gold, awakens dizzy. He coughs, and he laughs, at the Lep’s tizzy. Next year, he must beat the clock. and keep, in pocket, a glock. For gold, the rat baits; the fiddler’s busy.

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Date: 3/21/2025 5:37:00 AM
Dear Kim, Wow, the Leprechaun's misadventures is absolutely hilarious! I love how you've turned the traditional tale on its head, with the clever coot outsmarting the Lep. Your wordplay is brilliant, especially the "gold-green" and "tick-tock" rhymes. Thanks for this St. Paddy's Day chuckle! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2025 6:45:00 AM
Happy Spring and blessings, dear Daniel! Thank you!
Date: 3/20/2025 11:53:00 AM
The little people as they're known in Ireland, love your string of limericks Kim. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/20/2025 9:49:00 PM
All good here Kim, spring is here now, at long long last.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2025 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! My week is going okay, and yours? :)
Date: 3/20/2025 9:37:00 AM
This is a fun write which rang like bells - I really enjoyed
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2025 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Date: 3/20/2025 7:35:00 AM
The Lep hates to lose his gold, Very nicely penned
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Andre C Anderson
Date: 3/20/2025 10:55:00 AM
aaaah Kim, just plain cute and nice thanks
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2025 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, Joe…lol

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