No Strings Attached

- No - Strings - Attached - * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * lately i have become aware i was wrong thinking i am just me  there are lines above my head, a pair someone's controlling me for a fee the marketers with their advertising machines run us all, apparently and do so continually  they do so on walls or surfaces using screens everything we think is fed to us intentionally  no matter what your cause is it's them pulling the strings wether you are for or against or anywhere in between they write all of the scripts and the conflict that it brings if you like oil, the cash it makes or chose to be green trust me you're their puppet your speaking from their script it has been ingrained in your brain since your first day give them a child 'till he's five he's theirs he's been snipped even at the park - slide, swing or climb it's their way not you! right?somehow they missed your unique behind you're wrong they got you too, always no matter where you sit no one escapes the adjustment made to their mind the world is a stage and we merely the puppets on it 26~12~2014 Sponsor: John lawless Contest Name: PUPPETS
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Roper Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 9:43 AM
So true, Maurice, congratulations on your win Blessing and a Happy New Year
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 3:30 PM
So true my friend so true. Congratulations on your win.
Mohn Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Congrats Maurice...this is exceptional
Lamoureux Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 2:08 PM
A clever one Maurice, congratulations!
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:20 AM
a super fav :) and perfect 10 poem.
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:19 AM
HA HA, you are awesome. At times, I don't like the stage we live in. Anyways! Today, I'm sitting in the front roll, watching you read your script, take the lead. I don't know about your strings but, I'm the only one controlling my strings, since the day they cut the cord, so I really don't know what you are talking about. LOL, JK :) I'm talking about the umbilici cord. Maurice, this poem got to go down in history, and my favorite poem list. Time to relax, enjoy the show and break a leg. Luv~PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 9:24 PM
wow, way to go. He went for the social poem with something very important to say when he chose this one!!! Congrats on a well deserved win!!
Carmack Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Maurice, congrats, I like the visual effect of the strings.
Kiser Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 2:40 PM
So true...so true; well done.
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 1:21 PM
so pleased to see this in the winning list - congrats:-) Hugs jan x
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Hi Maurice, congratulations on your win for this contest. It is amazing how you thought outside the box for your puppet poem! Sandra
Lawless Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 11:56 AM
Maurice, this is the first poem I have ever seen wearing suspenders....but I don't wear suspenders often. You have gently pointed out poetically that we are all blind to our own "strings". Thanks for playing.
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 11:50 AM
congratulations Maurice on another well deserved win
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 1:10 AM
This is terrific, Maurice! Creative and so true...though no one wants to admit it. Best wishes in the contest (I don't think you need luck)...hugs, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:35 PM
GOOD ONE!!! You are so right because we are constantly being bombarded with images that we can not be rid of. Things that stay in our subconscious and never leave us. This is a very admirable poem for that contest, Maurice.
Smith Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Have a Coke and a smile. :)
Allison Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 5:18 AM
Love the unique take on the theme Maurice - I wrote one too - no idea what inspired me! Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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