No Strings Attached

make me real the puppet ragged its master ~ no i hate wind up toys

By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 2:04 PM
Very creative work you have penned in this one. Yes, no one wants to be a wind-up toy but some people want to be the one to control the wind-up toy. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:23 PM
A fine Monoku, David. Well done.
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 1:33 AM
Thank you Victor, I’m delighted with your endorsement, cheers David
Lane Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 5:47 AM
I was ready to go down Pinocchio Lane until I got to the wind up part. Clever mind you’ve allowed your puppet master to have. Clever poet!
Lane Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Lol David. I think you just did and reinforced me calling you a “clever poet!”
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Ha! I had Pinocchio in mind Lin, but thought the wind up toy might work better, probably should’ve called it, no springs attached lol, cheers David
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