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Starving little turtle Cracked eggshells Lost relationships Broken dreams Falling teeth Death opens the door Train departs from platform No one Waves of emotions No more

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Tim Smith

Date: 3/30/2016 1:23:00 PM

Dark poetry at it's best, You are a master of the style.

Fatima Hasan Zaidi

Date: 3/30/2016 10:43:00 AM

Lovely and deep

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2016 3:50:00 AM

the imagery of loneliness, rejection and depression shouts out from every line Arthur - the train departing from platform no one I find incredibly deep and sad:-( hugs jan xx7

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2016 11:42:00 PM

This one has it's own meaning " Death opens the door". When one starts hitting an age that they feel the door coming open it is frightening :( good write. Hugs sweet friend