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evening falls
darkness calls
every whisper
emotions malled

love stops
hearts clot
every move
stalled

emptyness sets in
seems theres nowhere to begin
here is to me all there is
sitting in a dizz
wanting to throw a tizz

hurt and pain
nothing there to regain
nothing here left to win
my hatred my sin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/16/2015 5:14:00 PM
When love stops, sadness comes along with dark emotions. Get rid of the hatred...it will make you feel worse; close one chapter elegantly and open another:) // paul
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Courtney Courtney
Date: 1/17/2015 9:35:00 PM
I am looking for the stomach pills. I am trying not to feel peeved, where is Doctor Suess when you want him? Thanks again.

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